This story is about an 11 year old girl who is made fun of in her school because they are jealous of her because she is fairly smart.
Review:
This is a topic that the media and the schools have been really drawing attention to lately. There is a group in the high schools now that have been going around with the slogan “It stops here”. They have made a group effort to bring attention to it, due to recent problems with this in the schools. I think this is a good concept, that each individual would make an effort not to hurt people and bully anyone to make themselves feel better. So kudos for helping out the effort, Ayesha.
The thing I noticed the most about this story and was kind of funny to me was I first noticed her blouse. I noticed it was pretty. Then, I noticed it kept changing colors. I was relieved, later on, when I found out the reason for this was the artwork was done by a 2-year old when it came to the colors. I was beginning to wonder what was the deal. It reminded me of one of those funny dreams you have where your clothes keep changing colors.


